{"id":405,"date":"2024-08-19T05:19:58","date_gmt":"2024-08-19T05:19:58","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/?p=405"},"modified":"2024-08-19T05:38:49","modified_gmt":"2024-08-19T05:38:49","slug":"jak-jsme-psali-pribeh","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/?p=405","title":{"rendered":"Jak jsme psali p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh"},"content":{"rendered":"\t\t<div data-elementor-type=\"wp-post\" data-elementor-id=\"405\" class=\"elementor elementor-405\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-b4470b9 elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"b4470b9\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-66 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-0d10ef9\" data-id=\"0d10ef9\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-dc6b59b elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"dc6b59b\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t<style>\/*! elementor - v3.23.0 - 05-08-2024 *\/\n.elementor-widget-text-editor.elementor-drop-cap-view-stacked .elementor-drop-cap{background-color:#69727d;color:#fff}.elementor-widget-text-editor.elementor-drop-cap-view-framed .elementor-drop-cap{color:#69727d;border:3px solid;background-color:transparent}.elementor-widget-text-editor:not(.elementor-drop-cap-view-default) .elementor-drop-cap{margin-top:8px}.elementor-widget-text-editor:not(.elementor-drop-cap-view-default) .elementor-drop-cap-letter{width:1em;height:1em}.elementor-widget-text-editor .elementor-drop-cap{float:left;text-align:center;line-height:1;font-size:50px}.elementor-widget-text-editor .elementor-drop-cap-letter{display:inline-block}<\/style>\t\t\t\t<p>Jednou z\u00a0radost\u00ed konce lo\u0148sk\u00e9ho roku byla n\u011bkolikat\u00fddenn\u00ed pr\u00e1ce, kdy \u017e\u00e1ci t\u0159et\u00edho trojro\u010d\u00ed psali vlastn\u00ed kr\u00e1tk\u00e9 p\u0159\u00edb\u011bhy. Zad\u00e1n\u00ed a postupn\u00e1 pr\u00e1ce mezi d\u011btmi \u017eily, tak\u017ee jsem je n\u011bkolikr\u00e1t v\u00a0r\u016fzn\u00fdch hodin\u00e1ch p\u0159istihl, jak se p\u0159edh\u00e1n\u011bj\u00ed v\u00a0tom, kdo pou\u017eije bizarn\u011bj\u0161\u00ed slovo nebo spojen\u00ed. Cel\u00e9 \u00fasil\u00ed vy\u00fastilo v\u00a0n\u011bkolik skv\u011bl\u00fdch autorsk\u00fdch performanc\u00ed a tak\u00e9 k\u00a0obdivn\u00e9mu sd\u00edlen\u00ed ve sborovn\u011b, kdy\u017e jsme si navz\u00e1jem \u010detli n\u011bkdy cel\u00e9 p\u0159\u00edb\u011bhy, jindy v\u011bty-perly.<\/p><p>C\u00edle n\u00e1s \u010de\u0161tin\u00e1\u0159\u016f u vstupu do sekvence, jej\u00ed\u017e p\u0159\u00edpravy jsou k\u00a0dispozici ve slo\u017ece <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/drive\/folders\/1AMw3ib8brOhtIfM99nwq1-wjuxF1_oR6?usp=drive_link\">&#8222;Psan\u00ed&#8220;<\/a>, byly dva. Zaprv\u00e9 to bylo zautomatizovat d\u011btem zlep\u0161ov\u00e1n\u00ed a p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed vlastn\u00edch v\u011bt. Vych\u00e1zely jsme p\u0159i tom z\u00a0publikace \u201eThe Writing Revolution\u201c autorek Judith C. Hochman a Natalie Wexler, kter\u00e9 \u0159\u00edkaj\u00ed, \u017ee skute\u010dnost, \u017ee se psan\u00ed \u010dasto u\u010d\u00ed na velk\u00fdch celc\u00edch (napi\u0161te esej\/\u00favahu apod.), vede ke kognitivn\u00edmu p\u0159et\u00ed\u017een\u00ed. Doporu\u010duj\u00ed proto u\u010dit psan\u00ed na mal\u00fdch celc\u00edch, jako je v\u011bta.\u00a0<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-33 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-9df6693\" data-id=\"9df6693\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-208c49b elementor-widget elementor-widget-image\" data-id=\"208c49b\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"image.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t<style>\/*! elementor - v3.23.0 - 05-08-2024 *\/\n.elementor-widget-image{text-align:center}.elementor-widget-image a{display:inline-block}.elementor-widget-image a img[src$=\".svg\"]{width:48px}.elementor-widget-image img{vertical-align:middle;display:inline-block}<\/style>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<img fetchpriority=\"high\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"950\" height=\"943\" src=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace-1024x1016.jpg\" class=\"attachment-large size-large wp-image-407\" alt=\"\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace-1024x1016.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace-300x298.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace-150x150.jpg 150w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace-768x762.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace-1536x1524.jpg 1536w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_ilustrace.jpg 1845w\" sizes=\"100vw\" \/>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-06b121a elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"06b121a\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-f3f47d9\" data-id=\"f3f47d9\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-5f1f252 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"5f1f252\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p>Soust\u0159ed\u011bn\u00ed se na jedinou v\u011btu umo\u017e\u0148uje \u017e\u00e1k\u016fm u\u0161et\u0159it prostor pracovn\u00ed pam\u011bti na to, aby se mohly skute\u010dn\u011b zam\u011b\u0159it na v\u00fdb\u011br slov a jejich skl\u00e1d\u00e1n\u00ed do mistrn\u00fdch v\u011bt, proto\u017ee jejich ment\u00e1ln\u00ed kapacita nen\u00ed zanesen\u00e1 stresem z toho, co bude v textu n\u00e1sledovat, zda m\u00e1 text odpov\u00eddaj\u00edc\u00ed d\u00e9lku apod. Z\u00e1rove\u0148 jde d\u00edky tomu tr\u00e9novat psan\u00ed v krat\u0161\u00ed dob\u011b a za\u0159adit ho do ka\u017ed\u00e9 hodiny (\u010dasto nap\u0159\u00edklad kon\u010d\u00edm hodinu zad\u00e1n\u00edm, aby d\u011bti jednou dokonalou v\u011btou napsaly, co se dan\u00fd den nau\u010dily). V\u00edce o tomto p\u0159\u00edstupu p\u00ed\u0161i na blogu <a href=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/?p=343\">Psan\u00ed krok po kroku<\/a>.<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-953b272 elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"953b272\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-33 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-b5df76f\" data-id=\"b5df76f\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-f4ffccf elementor-widget elementor-widget-image\" data-id=\"f4ffccf\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"image.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<img decoding=\"async\" width=\"564\" height=\"640\" src=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_singleparagraphoutline.png\" class=\"attachment-large size-large wp-image-408\" alt=\"\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_singleparagraphoutline.png 564w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_singleparagraphoutline-264x300.png 264w\" sizes=\"100vw\" \/>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-66 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-aa4df83\" data-id=\"aa4df83\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-3eb04a6 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"3eb04a6\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p>Teprve po zautomatizov\u00e1n\u00ed stavby v\u011bty jsme za\u010dali pracovat na druh\u00e9m c\u00edli, a to je pl\u00e1nov\u00e1n\u00ed psan\u00ed. Tak\u00e9 zde jsme se op\u00edrali o postupy z \u201eThe Writing Revolution\u201c a o princip uvol\u0148ov\u00e1n\u00ed kapacity pracovn\u00ed pam\u011bti. Nau\u010dili jsme d\u011bti pracovat s\u00a0obdobou toho, co Hochman a Wexler naz\u00fdvaj\u00ed \u201eSingle-Paragraph Outline\u201c (viz \u010dtvrt\u00e1 hodina sekvence a obr\u00e1zek). Jedn\u00e1 se o jednoduch\u00fd n\u00e1stroj, kde si d\u011bti napl\u00e1nuj\u00ed odstavec, d\u00edky \u010demu\u017e se pak nemus\u00ed soust\u0159edit na to, <em>co<\/em> budou ps\u00e1t, ale mohou v\u011bnovat v\u00edce prostoru na to, <em>jak <\/em>odstavec nap\u00ed\u0161\u00ed.<\/p><p>Abychom \u017e\u00e1k\u016fm zprost\u0159edkovali p\u0159\u00edklady mistrovsk\u00e9 praxe psan\u00ed, vyu\u017e\u00edvali jsme v\u00a0hodin\u00e1ch metody FASE Reading, kterou popisuji v\u00a0z\u00e1lo\u017ece <a href=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/?page_id=101\">Sylaby a pl\u00e1ny lekc\u00ed<\/a> v\u00a0sekci \u201ePr\u00e1ce s\u00a0textem\u201c. Postup se hodil k\u00a0tomu, abychom analyzovaly, jak jsou dobr\u00e9 texty naps\u00e1ny.\u00a0<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-c2ce5dd elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"c2ce5dd\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-9a3674a\" data-id=\"9a3674a\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-0de6f79 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"0de6f79\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p>Princip, se kter\u00fdm se d\u011bti skrze r\u016fzn\u00e9 texty opakovan\u011b setk\u00e1valy, byl, \u017ee mistrovsk\u00fd autor v\u011bci\u00a0<em>nepopisuje<\/em>, ale\u00a0<em>ukazuje<\/em>\u00a0(viz druh\u00e1 hodina). \u0160lo o c\u00edl, ke kter\u00e9mu pak sm\u011b\u0159ovalo tak\u00e9 opakovan\u00e9 p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed v\u011bt a odstavc\u016f, ke kter\u00e9mu jsme d\u011bti vedli v\u00a0hodin\u00e1ch a doprovodn\u00fdch \u00fakolech.<\/p><p class=\"MsoNormal\">Krom\u011b vyu\u017e\u00edv\u00e1n\u00ed techniky FASE Reading jsme se v\u00a0hodin\u00e1ch op\u00edrali o klasick\u00fd model explicitn\u00ed v\u00fduky J\u00c1-MY-VY, kdy po anal\u00fdze textu n\u00e1sledovala kr\u00e1tk\u00e1 lekce ukazuj\u00edc\u00ed n\u011bjakou spisovatelskou techniku. Tu si pak \u017e\u00e1ci procvi\u010dovali pomoc\u00ed cvi\u010den\u00ed z\u00a0prezentac\u00ed na mazac\u00ed tabulky a v\u00a0z\u00e1v\u011bru hodiny uplat\u0148ovali v\u00a0postupn\u00e9m tvo\u0159en\u00ed vlastn\u00edch p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh\u016f. D\u00edky tomu se u ka\u017ed\u00e9 techniky \u017e\u00e1ci nejprve sezn\u00e1mili s\u00a0p\u0159\u00edkladem, kter\u00fd poskytl v\u00fdchoz\u00ed text, dostali zobecn\u011bn\u00ed (f\u00e1ze J\u00c1), dril a zp\u011btnou vazbu (f\u00e1ze MY) a prostor pro samostatn\u00e9 uplatn\u011bn\u00ed (f\u00e1ze VY a navazuj\u00edc\u00ed \u00fakol). Nav\u00edc d\u00edky tomu odpadl \u201estra\u0161\u00e1k\u201c v\u00a0podob\u011b z\u00e1v\u011bre\u010dn\u00e9ho textu, proto\u017ee jednotliv\u00e9 pas\u00e1\u017ee psaly d\u011bti b\u011bhem hodin. Z\u00e1v\u011bre\u010dn\u00e9 psan\u00ed znamenalo \u201epouze\u201c d\u00e1t tyto pas\u00e1\u017ee dohromady a upravit.<\/p><p class=\"MsoNormal\">D\u016fraz na hlavn\u00ed dva c\u00edle \u2013 aby si \u017e\u00e1ci zautomatizovali p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed a zdokonalov\u00e1n\u00ed vlastn\u00edch v\u011bt a pl\u00e1nov\u00e1n\u00ed textu \u2013 se odrazily tak\u00e9 v\u00a0hodnocen\u00ed. Vych\u00e1zeli jsme s\u00a0kolegou z\u00a0v\u00fdborn\u00e9ho bonmotu Mirky Kellovsk\u00e9 ze Z\u0160 Na Ber\u00e1nku, kter\u00e1 \u0159\u00edk\u00e1, \u017ee hodnocen\u00ed je to, na co d\u00e1v\u00e1me hodnotu, tak\u017ee jsme v\u00a0sestavov\u00e1n\u00ed krit\u00e9ri\u00ed klasifikace dali d\u016fraz na dovednosti, kter\u00e9 jsme si stanovili jako z\u00e1sadn\u00ed pro za\u010d\u00e1tek schopnosti dobr\u00e9ho psan\u00ed. \u010ctvrtinu hodnocen\u00ed tvo\u0159ily odevzdan\u00e9 pl\u00e1ny (my\u0161lenkov\u00e1 mapa z\u00a0prvn\u00edch dvou hodin a osnova ze \u010dtvrt\u00e9 hodiny), druhou \u010dtvrtinu \u00fakoly zalo\u017een\u00e9 na naps\u00e1n\u00ed textu a jeho n\u00e1sledn\u00e9m p\u0159episu, kde jsme hodnotili schopnost vylep\u0161ovat vlastn\u00ed napsan\u00fd text, t\u0159et\u00ed \u010dtvrtina hodnocen\u00ed byla z\u00a0pr\u00e1ce v\u00a0hodin\u011b, kde jsme se op\u011bt zam\u011b\u0159ovali na to, zda \u017e\u00e1ci n\u011bkolikr\u00e1t p\u0159episuj\u00ed napsan\u00fd text a zlep\u0161uj\u00ed ho a zda procvi\u010duj\u00ed c\u00edlov\u00e9 techniky.\u00a0<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-b68b502 elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"b68b502\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-66 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-2eabdb2\" data-id=\"2eabdb2\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-fe14187 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"fe14187\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p>Pouze \u010dtvrtina pak bylo hodnocen\u00ed v\u00fdsledn\u00e9ho textu. Krit\u00e9ria tohoto hodnocen\u00ed ilustruje obr\u00e1zek. \u0160lo n\u00e1m o to, aby v\u00fdsledn\u00fd text byl kr\u00e1tk\u00fd (a nav\u00edc ho d\u011bti psaly postupn\u011b v\u00edce ne\u017e m\u011bs\u00edc) a soust\u0159ed\u011bn\u00ed \u0161lo p\u0159edev\u0161\u00edm k\u00a0p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed a pl\u00e1nov\u00e1n\u00ed. V\u00edce o hodnocen\u00ed a zp\u016fsobu, jak jsme ho prezentovali d\u011btem ukazuje p\u0159\u00edprava na t\u0159et\u00ed hodinu sekvence.<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-33 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-2b2afa1\" data-id=\"2b2afa1\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-5b48a53 elementor-widget elementor-widget-image\" data-id=\"5b48a53\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"image.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<img decoding=\"async\" width=\"950\" height=\"262\" src=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_hodnoceni-1024x282.png\" class=\"attachment-large size-large wp-image-409\" alt=\"\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_hodnoceni-1024x282.png 1024w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_hodnoceni-300x83.png 300w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_hodnoceni-768x211.png 768w, https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/08\/007_hodnoceni.png 1231w\" sizes=\"100vw\" \/>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-f87403e elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"f87403e\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-c7bb070\" data-id=\"c7bb070\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-012f813 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"012f813\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p><a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/drive\/folders\/1FQF9hVr4pQnq96Pwiczh1FPijoKQ6sZY?usp=drive_link\">Slo\u017eka s p\u0159\u00edpravami<\/a> za\u010d\u00edn\u00e1 prac\u00ed na postav\u011b v\u00a0prvn\u00edch dvou hodin\u00e1ch. Vych\u00e1zeli jsme z\u00a0toho, co p\u00ed\u0161e Aristoteles v \u201ePoetice\u201c, \u017ee postava je nositelem vlastnost\u00ed, kter\u00e9 se p\u0159etavuj\u00ed v\u00a0touhy a ty h\u00fdbou d\u011bjem. Tento postup \u017e\u00e1k\u016fm pomohl vymyslet, o \u010dem vlastn\u011b budou ps\u00e1t. N\u00e1vrh z\u00e1pletky se n\u011bkomu m\u016f\u017ee tvo\u0159it t\u011b\u017eko, ale vytvo\u0159it postavu, o kter\u00e9 bych cht\u011bl ps\u00e1t, je snaz\u0161\u00ed. A z\u00a0postupn\u00e9 pr\u00e1ce na postav\u011b pak vyplynulo tak\u00e9 to, o \u010dem bude dan\u00fd p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh.<\/p><p>Druh\u00e1 a t\u0159et\u00ed hodina pak maj\u00ed za c\u00edl drilovat p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed a nau\u010dit d\u011bti hledat p\u0159esn\u00e9 formulace, kter\u00e9 sc\u00e9nu nejen pop\u00ed\u0161\u00ed, ale tak\u00e9 emo\u010dn\u011b zprost\u0159edkuj\u00ed \u010dten\u00e1\u0159i. Dosud \u017e\u00e1ci st\u00e1le pracuj\u00ed s\u00a0jednou v\u011btou, kterou se u\u010d\u00ed p\u0159episovat a vylep\u0161ovat. Teprve ve \u010dtvrt\u00e9 hodin\u011b p\u0159ich\u00e1z\u00ed n\u00e1stroje k\u00a0napl\u00e1nov\u00e1n\u00ed v\u011bt\u0161\u00edho celku, kter\u00fdm je odstavec. V\u00a0p\u00e1t\u00e9 hodin\u011b se pak u\u010d\u00ed p\u0159\u00edm\u00e1 \u0159e\u010d, kter\u00e1 je op\u011bt spisovatelsk\u00fdm n\u00e1strojem toho, jak nepopisovat, ale evokovat nebo ilustrovat.<\/p><p>Mezi jednotliv\u00fdmi hodinami m\u011bli \u017e\u00e1ci v\u017edy \u00fakol, kter\u00fd v\u00a0r\u00e1mci na\u0161eho syst\u00e9mu vypracov\u00e1vaj\u00ed na samostatn\u00fdch prac\u00edch. V\u00a0klasick\u00e9 \u010dasov\u00e9 dotaci lze k\u00a0vypracov\u00e1n\u00ed \u00fakol\u016f vyu\u017e\u00edt klasick\u00e9 hodiny \u010de\u0161tiny. V\u00fdhodou je v\u00a0tom p\u0159\u00edpad\u011b to, \u017ee si \u017e\u00e1ci l\u00e1tku jednotliv\u00fdch hodin mohou p\u0159ed samostatn\u00fdm vypracov\u00e1n\u00edm \u00fakolu zopakovat spolu se t\u0159\u00eddou a u\u010ditelem, p\u0159\u00edpadn\u011b si mohou \u00fakoly na konci hodiny vz\u00e1jemn\u011b ohodnotit.<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-a26038e elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"a26038e\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-25 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-218a450\" data-id=\"218a450\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-a900e03 elementor-view-default elementor-widget elementor-widget-icon\" data-id=\"a900e03\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"icon.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-icon-wrapper\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-icon\">\n\t\t\t<i aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"fas fa-quote-left\"><\/i>\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-50 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-0d637ad\" data-id=\"0d637ad\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-51a3282 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"51a3282\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p><em>B\u011bhem oprav n\u00e1s zarazila vysok\u00e1 kvalita p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh\u016f. Vysok\u00e9 o\u010dek\u00e1v\u00e1n\u00ed t\u00fdkaj\u00edc\u00ed se stavby v\u011bty a uvol\u0148ov\u00e1n\u00ed kapacity pracovn\u00ed pam\u011bti p\u0159i postupn\u00e9m stav\u011bn\u00ed le\u0161en\u00ed vedly k\u00a0tomu, \u017ee \u017e\u00e1ci psali rozvit\u00e9 v\u011bty s\u00a0komplexn\u00ed slovn\u00ed z\u00e1sobou.<\/em><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-25 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-4459cb2\" data-id=\"4459cb2\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-91f9abb elementor-view-default elementor-widget elementor-widget-icon\" data-id=\"91f9abb\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"icon.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-icon-wrapper\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-icon\">\n\t\t\t<i aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"fas fa-quote-right\"><\/i>\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-0ccb2e0 elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"0ccb2e0\" data-element_type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-9385999\" data-id=\"9385999\" data-element_type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-09e445f elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"09e445f\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p>Celou sekvenci jsme zakon\u010dovali dvouhodinovkou, b\u011bhem kter\u00e9 m\u011bly d\u011bti za \u00fakol nejprve n\u00e1m poskytnout podklady pro hodnocen\u00ed, tedy p\u0159ipraven\u00e9 a zkontrolovan\u00e9 pl\u00e1ny a p\u0159ipraven\u00e9 a zkontrolovan\u00e9 \u00fakoly a pozn\u00e1mky z\u00a0hodin. Kdo takto uk\u00e1zal, \u017ee m\u00e1 v\u0161e p\u0159ipraven\u00e9, dostal linkovan\u00fd pap\u00edr a v\u00a0r\u00e1mci dvou hodin p\u0159epsal p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh na\u010disto a odevzdal.<\/p><p>B\u011bhem oprav n\u00e1s zarazila vysok\u00e1 kvalita p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh\u016f. Vysok\u00e9 o\u010dek\u00e1v\u00e1n\u00ed t\u00fdkaj\u00edc\u00ed se stavby v\u011bty a uvol\u0148ov\u00e1n\u00ed kapacity pracovn\u00ed pam\u011bti p\u0159i postupn\u00e9m stav\u011bn\u00ed le\u0161en\u00ed vedly k\u00a0tomu, \u017ee \u017e\u00e1ci psali rozvit\u00e9 v\u011bty s\u00a0komplexn\u00ed slovn\u00ed z\u00e1sobou, jako nap\u0159\u00edklad (cituji zde pouze z\u00a0text\u016f, jejich\u017e auto\u0159i souhlasili s\u00a0t\u00edm, \u017ee sv\u00e9 texty budou publikovat online; v\u00a0pr\u016fb\u011bhu podzimu si bude mo\u017en\u00e9 n\u011bkter\u00e9 p\u0159\u00edb\u011bhy, v\u010detn\u011b t\u011bch, ze kter\u00fdch je citov\u00e1no n\u00ed\u017ee, p\u0159e\u010d\u00edst na webu www.rubinovaknihovna.cz):<\/p><p><em>Do o\u010d\u00ed j\u00ed zasv\u00edtila jasn\u00e1 z\u00e1\u0159e rann\u00edho slunce a znenad\u00e1n\u00ed ji probrala z\u00a0hlubok\u00e9ho sp\u00e1nku. Pooch\u0159adle vstala z tvrd\u00e9 slam\u011bn\u00e9 postele a \u0161la si ven k\u00a0lavoru opl\u00e1chnout obli\u010dej. <\/em><\/p><p><em>Lid\u00e9, kte\u0159\u00ed si dr\u017eeli ruku nad \u010delem, aby jim do o\u010d\u00ed nesv\u00edtilo sv\u011btlo nep\u0159\u00edjemn\u011b se odr\u00e1\u017eej\u00edc\u00ed od mluv\u00edc\u00edho mu\u017ee stoj\u00edc\u00edho na kameni, mu pozorn\u011b naslouchali.<\/em><\/p><p><em>Je ve\u010der, Ruby le\u017e\u00ed v\u00a0posteli. Jej\u00ed pokoj zal\u00e9vaj\u00ed r\u016f\u017eov\u00e9 paprsky z\u00e1padu slunce. V\u00a0pokoji j\u00ed hraje hudba, hudba hraje tak nahlas, \u017ee je skoro nemo\u017en\u00e9 sly\u0161et svoje vlastn\u00ed my\u0161len\u00ed.<\/em><\/p><p>Vysok\u00e1 kvalita n\u00e1s vedla k\u00a0tomu, \u017ee jsme v\u00a0r\u00e1mci t\u0159\u00edd uspo\u0159\u00e1dali dobrovoln\u00e1 autorsk\u00e1 i neautorsk\u00e1 \u010dten\u00ed, kde \u017e\u00e1ci mohli sv\u016fj p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh p\u0159e\u010d\u00edst nahlas nebo ho nechat p\u0159e\u010d\u00edst n\u011bkoho jin\u00e9ho. Po ka\u017ed\u00e9m p\u0159e\u010dten\u00ed n\u00e1sledovala s\u00e9rie ocen\u011bn\u00ed pro autora.<\/p><p>Mimo jin\u00e9 i d\u00edky tomuto povzbuzen\u00ed p\u0159ed publikem se \u0159ada \u017e\u00e1k\u016f rozhodla sv\u016fj p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh tak\u00e9 uve\u0159ejnit na webov\u00fdch str\u00e1nk\u00e1ch na\u0161eho trojro\u010d\u00ed, co\u017e vy\u017eadovalo dal\u0161\u00ed pr\u00e1ci s\u00a0textem.<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Jednou z\u00a0radost\u00ed konce lo\u0148sk\u00e9ho roku byla n\u011bkolikat\u00fddenn\u00ed pr\u00e1ce, kdy \u017e\u00e1ci t\u0159et\u00edho trojro\u010d\u00ed psali vlastn\u00ed kr\u00e1tk\u00e9 p\u0159\u00edb\u011bhy. Zad\u00e1n\u00ed a postupn\u00e1 pr\u00e1ce mezi d\u011btmi \u017eily, tak\u017ee jsem je n\u011bkolikr\u00e1t v\u00a0r\u016fzn\u00fdch hodin\u00e1ch p\u0159istihl, jak se p\u0159edh\u00e1n\u011bj\u00ed v\u00a0tom, kdo pou\u017eije bizarn\u011bj\u0161\u00ed slovo nebo spojen\u00ed. Cel\u00e9 \u00fasil\u00ed vy\u00fastilo v\u00a0n\u011bkolik skv\u011bl\u00fdch autorsk\u00fdch performanc\u00ed a tak\u00e9 k\u00a0obdivn\u00e9mu sd\u00edlen\u00ed ve sborovn\u011b, kdy\u017e jsme &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/?p=405\" class=\"more-link\">Read more<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8222;Jak jsme psali p\u0159\u00edb\u011bh&#8220;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-405","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/405","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=405"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/405\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":413,"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/405\/revisions\/413"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=405"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=405"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.cestinaexplicitne.cz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=405"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}